hi i dont comment much but i was wondering if you're ever planning on the mc removing the collar on ryoko or maybe talking about removing it, (if there was a scene about it i don't remember my apologies) not that I'm against it just curious if something is planned with it. also wondering if she chooses to wear it in the shower/bath or she cant take it off because i was a bit concerned about that
At the beginning, the first thing the MC says when he meets Ryoko is about that. And later on, of course, everything will go together with the main story.
I'm not very far into the game, but I have a small complaint. The writing, or language rather needs to be tidied up. It's understandable, but it's not smooth. The first goddess is referred to by both she and he pronouns. Not an issue for me if deliberate, but it looks and feels like the S was left off by mistake. Other things like that are common. Words or letters missing. I think proof reading would clear this up.
Thanks for your feedbacks! I appreciate them very much, and about the grammatical errors, they are my fault, I always miss them but I'm fixing little by little.
Later in the story you'll see Ncrow really fixed their writing skills and it becomes extremely coherent and you'll barely be able to tell there was even any issues with it at all.
I really love the relaxing atmosphere of this game. It wraps you in the world, you have a very promising future in general game layout and themes and character design and personalities/body language are spot on
Its a very good game with potential, although 1 issue, I am kinda confused with what I am suppose to do, so maybe a quest menu? and you can also put hints in the character page if someone wants to advance on that certain character or just wants to play the game easier, over all, very nice story!
Honestly i love all the effort you put into wholesome moments with the girls like hugging and laying etc, it shows an obvious build up of love that seems to be lacking in most Vns. heck id even play this if it had 0 porn in it it is that wholesome, nice job in that department!
While not a bad start you really need to have someone proofread and edit it . I found quite a few times the wording was out of order or things were misspelled or had the wrong word ( attitude where it should be aptitude when they were talking about magic for instance)
If she does it's not clear or obvious like it is with the mom. All we know about her is that she walked into oncoming traffic, if she has some importance outside of that it hasn't shown or hinted at yet.
Maybe! Would be interesting if she turned out to be or to have become a goddess as well. Poses a lot of questions too, one that makes me doubt it a bit though too.
We'll have to wait and see! Either way it will be interesting to find out more
Playing the new version,im confident in saying this could be another game in the high ranks,like:champion of the realms or hero's harem guild. Its just a matter of time....
very impressive! Don't get me wrong but the tipes of games, that picture the protagonist dying on the begining, and going into a goddess realm and bla bla bla, it gets really saturated, but what you did was really good. I'm looking forward for the rest of the game to be realeased!!!
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stumbled over this by chance, while poking around in your scripts. sorry not sorry :)
in hana_events.rpy around line 450, at the end of "label hana_first_talk"
should be the variable "hana_affection" instead.
a fun ride so far, looking forward to see the story unfold!
Seeing my scripts is like seeing me naked, but I wouldn't have noticed, thanks anyway.
Hmm...is there upcoming scene for the godess?
Of course
Can this be played in joiplay cuz theres no andriod ver?
From what others are saying, I think so.
Nice update bro, from now i can go fishing on my android deceive
Perfect, I needed this confirmation, my phone is too old to test that external application.
Will there be an android version??
I don't have it planned yet but I'll leave it at a maybe.
Hmmm strange why i can play it in android
there is no android version. so maybe you are using joiplay to run tha pc version in your phone
yieeee
Will there be Impregnation/marriage in the future?
Yes
let's goo!!
hi i dont comment much but i was wondering if you're ever planning on the mc removing the collar on ryoko or maybe talking about removing it, (if there was a scene about it i don't remember my apologies) not that I'm against it just curious if something is planned with it. also wondering if she chooses to wear it in the shower/bath or she cant take it off because i was a bit concerned about that
At the beginning, the first thing the MC says when he meets Ryoko is about that. And later on, of course, everything will go together with the main story.
I'm not very far into the game, but I have a small complaint. The writing, or language rather needs to be tidied up. It's understandable, but it's not smooth. The first goddess is referred to by both she and he pronouns. Not an issue for me if deliberate, but it looks and feels like the S was left off by mistake. Other things like that are common. Words or letters missing. I think proof reading would clear this up.
Ok, the actual story writing is looking to be amazing just like the visuals.
The language issues still make me sad, but you're making an amazing game and translating it into a language not your own. You're awesome.
The music in this is also so cool and amazing
Thanks for your feedbacks! I appreciate them very much, and about the grammatical errors, they are my fault, I always miss them but I'm fixing little by little.
Later in the story you'll see Ncrow really fixed their writing skills and it becomes extremely coherent and you'll barely be able to tell there was even any issues with it at all.
a wonderful game with great potential. can't wait for the next update. :)
Absolutely fantastic game.
amazing game! keep up the great work
I really love the relaxing atmosphere of this game. It wraps you in the world, you have a very promising future in general game layout and themes and character design and personalities/body language are spot on
Its a very good game with potential, although 1 issue, I am kinda confused with what I am suppose to do, so maybe a quest menu? and you can also put hints in the character page if someone wants to advance on that certain character or just wants to play the game easier, over all, very nice story!
Thank you! I'm already working on the interface of the missions and hints, I will implement it soon!
Honestly i love all the effort you put into wholesome moments with the girls like hugging and laying etc, it shows an obvious build up of love that seems to be lacking in most Vns. heck id even play this if it had 0 porn in it it is that wholesome, nice job in that department!
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoy it!
While not a bad start you really need to have someone proofread and edit it . I found quite a few times the wording was out of order or things were misspelled or had the wrong word ( attitude where it should be aptitude when they were talking about magic for instance)
I have to improve a lot in my English, thank you for this! it is very useful
Tons of potential, looking forward to following your progress
Anyone else suspect that the mystery girl who founded the village is MC's mom that also made a deal with one of the goddesses?
what about the girl he saved before death? has to have some importance right?
If she does it's not clear or obvious like it is with the mom. All we know about her is that she walked into oncoming traffic, if she has some importance outside of that it hasn't shown or hinted at yet.
me
I feel differently, like mcs mom is a goddess and the mystery girl.
It's weird both things were told to us pretty quickly with barely any nudging from us.
Maybe! Would be interesting if she turned out to be or to have become a goddess as well. Poses a lot of questions too, one that makes me doubt it a bit though too.
We'll have to wait and see! Either way it will be interesting to find out more
Playing the new version,im confident in saying this could be another game in the high ranks,like:champion of the realms or hero's harem guild. Its just a matter of time....
but im horny now
very impressive! Don't get me wrong but the tipes of games, that picture the protagonist dying on the begining, and going into a goddess realm and bla bla bla, it gets really saturated, but what you did was really good. I'm looking forward for the rest of the game to be realeased!!!
Thank you! my goal is to make an entertaining story so I really appreciate it!
It ain't much,but its honest work